Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Pilgrimage pg 20

Page 20

here's the latest page in my webcomic, the first one inked with the oh-so-wonderful Pentel Pocket Brushpen (*swoons*) and probably one of my more complex scene transitions and landscape shots. I've got such tunnel-vision with this comic that for all I know the narrative is totally incomprehensible, this is where you come in, dear reader, if you'd like to share your two cents on what's clear or unclear, I'm always interested in feedback.