Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Pilgrimage pg 20

Page 20

here's the latest page in my webcomic, the first one inked with the oh-so-wonderful Pentel Pocket Brushpen (*swoons*) and probably one of my more complex scene transitions and landscape shots. I've got such tunnel-vision with this comic that for all I know the narrative is totally incomprehensible, this is where you come in, dear reader, if you'd like to share your two cents on what's clear or unclear, I'm always interested in feedback.

1 comment:

  1. Well, having only read up to this point, I'm assuming that the two in the first panel are Daisy and her... foreman (the guy who said good work). The three middle panels are very pretty and setting up what I think is a joke in the last panel. If it's a joke, honestly, I don't get it. If it's not a joke... well, I guess I still don't get it lol. I expect that it will probably be explained in a later page, but I just discovered you about 10 minutes ago, lol. Unless something monumental happens in the next two pages, I hope you'll continue posting.